From f8acf2aa59f744b0f9e3b732d2eb7a88d0fe99e4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ellpeck <me@ellpeck.de>
Date: Wed, 7 Apr 2021 04:44:56 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] updated commission terms wording

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         <p>Here is all the information you need if you want to commission me to make a mod for you:</p>
         <ul>
             <li>I create Minecraft Forge mods only.</li>
-            <li>I work in Minecraft Versions 1.12.2 and upwards only.</li>
-            <li>No ports of existing mods or content.</li>
-            <li>You will have the choice of whether you want to receive the source code privately or whether I should publish it on GitHub.</li>
-            <li>You will have the choice of whether you want to be sent the mod jar or whether I should publish the mod on CurseForge. If the mod is published on CurseForge, you will get up to 50% of the share of Curse Points generated through the mod.</li>
-            <li>After the mod is completed, bug fixes are included for free, but feature updates and Minecraft version updates are not. They can be requested at a later date for a small fee though.</li>
+            <li>I do not create ports of existing mods or content.</li>
+            <li>I work in Minecraft versions 1.12.2 and upwards only.</li>
+            <li>The source code will be hosted on GitHub, and you will be able to see the progress through the commit history. You have the choice of whether this repository should be kept private.</li>
+            <li>You will have the choice of whether I send you the mod jar or publish the mod on CurseForge. If the mod is published on CurseForge, you will get up to 50% of the Curse Points generated through the mod.</li>
+            <li>After the mod is completed, bug fixes are included for free, but feature updates and Minecraft version updates are not. However, both can be requested at a later date as a separate commission.</li>
             <li>I don't maintain mods for multiple Minecraft versions simultaneously, so you will have to select a single version for which you want the mod created and maintained.</li>
-            <li>I usually charge an average of 20€ (<a href="https://www.google.com/search?q=20+euro+in+dollar">$23</a>) an hour.
+            <li>I charge an average of €20 (<a href="https://www.google.com/search?q=20+euro+in+dollar">$23</a>) an hour.
                 <ul>
                     <li>I estimate the total amount of time it will take based on the size and complexity of the mod beforehand.</li>
-                    <li>I request half of the estimated amount to be paid before I start working on the mod, the other half once I'm finished. That way, there's security for both of us.</li>
-                    <li>If a feature takes much more time than expected, I might raise the second payment's price slightly. Of course, if I do this, I will also provide an explanation as to why this is necessary.</li>
+                    <li>I request half of the estimated amount to be paid before I start working on the mod, the other half once the work is completed. That way, there is security for both of us.</li>
+                    <li>If a feature takes much more time than expected, I will raise the price of the second payment. I will not do this without explaining why this is necessary.</li>
                 </ul>
             </li>
-            <li>You have to be at least 18 years old, and you have to pay with your own PayPal account. I don't accept other forms of payment.</li>
+            <li>If I cannot complete the project for any reason, I will refund the paid amount. If you abandon the agreement before the work is completed, you will not receive a refund.</li>
+            <li>You have to be at least 18 years old, and you have to pay with your own PayPal account. I do not accept other forms of payment.</li>
         </ul>
 
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